Wednesday, May 15, 2013


CRASH, BOOM, SMACK was all I heard as our airplane went down. When I woke up my head felt dizzy and my stomach felt weird. I didn’t see the plane anymore, but that did not matter to me, all I wanted was to find my brother. Then I heard a moan in the creepers that sounded like Sam! I ran to into the creepers looking for Sam. Then I saw him in those long, green things. “Eric!” Sam yelled at me. “Sam!” I yelled back. Then I helped him get out of the green thingies and hugged. Me and Sam are twins, as our parents tell us. “Are you ok?” asked Sam as we stopped hugging. “I’m fine. You was the one trapped in the creeper,” I said, giggling. Sam looked mad at me but then he started to giggle as well! “So what should we do?” I asked. All of a sudden a loud noise echoed! “Wee should follow the noise!” We both said. We ran and ran and ran until we reached the loud noisemaker. We saw a bunch of other boys, a fat kid, and a boy holding a shell thing! We walked over to the group and said, “Sam, Eric, Sam, Eric.” The big kid mixed our names and we had to point at each other. We heard the group behind us laugh. We smiled as well. After everything got quiet a guy with red hair asked, “Who blew the conch.” I got bored after they talked about other stuff. Then I heard, “Which is Eric—? You? No—you’re Sam—”. My brother said Sam and I said I was Eric. We heard the fat kid name was piggy and my brother and I laughed at. Really, Piggy! After that we voted for a chief. Both my brother and I voted for the person holding the conch. It was Ralph! Then the Jack guy became the leader of the hunters. Then Ralph and Simon and Jack left. So I decided to take a nap under a tree.

2 comments:

  1. this is a very in detailed blog but it is awesome.

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  2. haha Sounds like you have ad a tough time too. And STOP CALLING ME PIGGY!!

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